He walks where the city forgets to dream,
Off Swanston’s pulse, in a side-street seam.
An old man carved from dusk and ache,
Thin as memory, too brittle to break.
Beret tilted like a wounded crown,
Eyes cast low, like the heavens frown.
Each step a whisper, each breath a thread,
The living ghost of a life half-dead.
In his hand—O fate!—a paper curled,
Tight as secrets that once rocked the world.
Is it a letter? A map? A name?
A poem never read, or a war’s last flame?
The trams don’t pause for men like this,
Worn to the bone by what they miss.
Yet still he moves, through wind and grime,
Dragging behind the weight of time.
No one sees him—just a blur,
Of beret, bones, and something sirred.
But somewhere deep, the city knows,
He walks with all its buried prose.
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Una calle muy concurrida de la que tu has sabido aislar a ese transeúnte de la gorra que parece caminar seguro de si mismo sin atender a nadie más. Un gran monocromo.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Luis. The subject isolation through narrow DOF is what we all love to do
DeleteHe looks determined.
ReplyDeleteOn a mission
DeleteThat elderly fellow has seen a great deal of history, and is surrounded by those much younger than him on this street. Just imagine what knowledge he has, and the stories he could tell.
ReplyDeleteYeah, time serves
DeleteIn every city, you can always find people with the personality of the person in your photo. Excellent street photography.
ReplyDeleteI like that vibe
DeleteEasy to see that he was enjoying his walk along that Melbourne's crowded sidewalk on a sunny morning. Great photo!
ReplyDeletePart of city charm
DeleteHe is very nattily dressed!
ReplyDeleteNice -Christine cmlk79.blogspot.com
ReplyDeleteA well dressed character who has experienced a lot of life. Thank you for linking up and have a great weekend.
ReplyDeleteI like the focal character — his cap and beard. Well done in highlighting him.
ReplyDeleteUn personaje que parece fuera de lugar
ReplyDeleteYour photograph is impressive, but even more so are the profound thoughts laid out in this poem, dedicated to the care for our fellow humans. We are always hurried in our daily routine and rarely notice someone next to us who needs support... sometimes just a smile is enough!
ReplyDeletePeople do tend to look past the "elderly" folks as they walk down a street.
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me of the song written by John Prine, "Hello in there."
A little more and the congested area passes.
ReplyDeleteA little more and the congested area passes.
ReplyDeleteInteresting old fellow :-D
ReplyDeleteYour posts have become so profound. I think you should put it all in a book. I love this photo. Thank you for joining FFO and have a wonderful day.
ReplyDeleteThis is an excellent photo that tells entire stories. The poem is very beautiful and poignant.
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