Beneath the glow of neon skies,
On La Trobe where the tram line lies,
A café hums with twilight’s grace,
Its windows catch her earnest face.
She leans across the table low,
Where streetlights cast a golden glow,
One hand aloft, mid-phrase, mid-flight—
A flame of thought, alive with light.
Her words are wind, her fingers dance,
Each motion sharp, a bold advance.
The other girl, in silence steeped,
Watches her meaning slowly seep.
Espresso cools, the hour grows deep,
Yet neither bends toward rest or sleep.
The night, a stage of shadowed flame,
Records their truths without a name.
For here, beneath the city’s skin,
The realest talks of life begin.
Two souls in flare, one gesture wide—
A moment lit, then brushed aside.
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Parece estar en una conversación interesante en la que expone su punto de vista.
ReplyDeleteRather animated
DeleteShe has long thin fingers, the pianists have.
ReplyDeleteGood observations
DeleteHe has personality.
ReplyDeleteBig personality perhaps
DeleteA coffee chat with the interesting detail that the interlocutor doesn't appear in the photo!
ReplyDeleteI wasn't fast enough
DeleteThe asymmetrical composition is unique, and I like it.
ReplyDeleteThat is also another style of street photography
DeleteIntense!
ReplyDeleteFull of views and opinions
DeleteShe is sharing an important thought with her friend, and more important is the social connection they share.
ReplyDeleteNice
ReplyDeleteBrilliant street candid capture.
ReplyDeleteI feel like I was there drinking espresso, too.
ReplyDeleteIt appears that she is looking to see if those hearing understand what she is talking about.
ReplyDeleteGreat portrait of the women with f1.2, considering there was not enought light.
ReplyDeleteShe looks very animated, looks like a good conversation she's having.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful photo. She is deep in conversation. Always love your poems too. Thank you for joining FFO and have a nice weekend.
ReplyDeleteGood shot. She looks really happy :-D
ReplyDeleteThis is brilliant, Roentare! These words capture the beauty of your image and words: "A flame of thought, alive with light."
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